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Perhaps in the hollow
space between
my clavicle
and scapula-

That's where your chin
rested all summer long

and that's where the tears
fell in September.
For two friends.
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Given 2012-04-25
Where are regrets kept? by ~sillycanadianwriter Suggester Writes: A tiny poem about love and loss which punches way above its weight. ( Suggested by monstroooo and Featured by Beccalicious )
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dweckie Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student Writer
Hello! I've featured you in my journal here : [link] , as I love this poem :heart:
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Athazagoraphobias Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I adore this. Such simplistic beauty. Terribly easy to relate to. :heart:
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DamagedHomewrecker Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
simple but absolutely stunning
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:iconkirbynat:
kirbynat Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's so simple, yet...
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:iconelucidator:
Elucidator Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Oh, this hurts my soul in such a pleasing way. Fantastic work. Incredibly moving.
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:iconspazmasterryuga:
SpazmasterRyuga Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well done in conveying such strong feelings in so few words.
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:iconkuro-shi15:
Kuro-shi15 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
this is so sweet and it makes me want to cry ; A ;
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JSCB112 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
wow
touching
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:iconlhene-amira:
Lhene-Amira Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
A well-deserved DD :)
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E-X-A-L-T Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
So beautiful and sad :(
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penguinwrangler109 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i cried
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:iconatrue:
ATrue Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
Congrats on the DD! :clap:

I'm a silly Canadian writer too. :flagcanada:
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:iconnarcaholic:
Narcaholic Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student
Nice job. It's very meaningful.
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:iconwaffles301:
waffles301 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...just...wow..
Those 26 words hit me like a punch in the gut. Wow...I love this so much...
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:iconblacksand459:
Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! I love this poem. That is the truth right there. ;) I know from experience.
Congrats on a very well-deserved DD! :clap:
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DancingDragon Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Simply, profound. All that it needs to be, really. DD well deserved.
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
"Which punches way above its weight."
That's putting it lightly.
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:iconhunter-re:
Hunter-Re Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OOH! this is a beautiful piece!
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Delicatesilver Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry, but I only faved this for the word "clavicle". (I'm just kidding, but I do enjoy the word.) It was smooth in a way I could only imagine my poetry being. Great job, definitely deserved the DD it received.
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Star-chaser97 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Writer
This is amazing!
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:iconkittykittyhunter:
kittykittyhunter Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012   Writer
Ooh! It's so nice to see a piece I've encountered before get a DD! :la: Congrats!
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TraficJam Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
simple and beautiful <3 congrats on the DD
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:iconmelyj60:
melyj60 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Love it!
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ChasingShadowsPhoto Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Student Photographer
Though short, this is very powerful. Congrats on the DD! :D
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:iconchronomarle:
chronomarle Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
what happened in september ;looool
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Robenix Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Short pieces like this are nice. Good job and congrats!
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:iconvictorhugo:
VictorHugo Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Long story made short, makes my heart ache. Great job!
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:iconmartinhamilton:
martinhamilton Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012
Well Done :)
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:iconberrybluearia:
berrybluearia Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like how you kept it short but beautiful. To me, it's impossible to do.
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AeternusVotum Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Short and yet so powerful!
This was really amazing, a well deserved DD :clap:
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Drawn-Imagination Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Beautiful, says so much.. with so little *u*
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:iconladyofgaerdon:
LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2012  Professional Writer
*sigh* That was lovely. Congrats on your DD.
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universemarshmallow Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
Hey. Wow. Long story short...

This blew me away. That's some pretty powerful stuff ya got there. Well done.
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sillycanadianwriter Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks. That means a ton coming from you. :heart:

I don't know why I feel inspired to say this, but I want you to know how blessed I am to have you in my life(: You're a great inspiration, for mostly better and occasionally worse. Out of the toughest stuff comes the most emotion, right? :/ Well, love ya loads, darling, you get me through more than you know.

Btw, so jealous of the fact that you can go swimming in the morning and still look gorgeous all day. No fair.
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universemarshmallow Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
You're so welcome, you amazing writer, you. :glomp:

Thank you so much~ You've changed my life for the better as well and I'm so happy we're friends. I love you too. :love:

I don't know how I did it. It was pretty impressive, wasn't it? :iconlachoirplz:
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InfinitexInsanity Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Short and sweet. Very well done!
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PursuingTheCerberus Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011  Professional Writer
much like Femme-Fatale...at first I wanted more....but then I realized that the poem was perfect as is.....

writing with brevity takes a graceful hand....and I think you accomplished a great deal here...

Summer love....summer companionship.....I think almost everyone has an experience they can relate to this poem.....and when you accomplish that, you are golden....

well done!
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kittykittyhunter Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011   Writer
This poem is a real treat: it's a combination of sciency realism with romantic reflection at the end. Lovely work.
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sillycanadianwriter Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!!!! I love to combine science and art; I think the two suit each other beautifully.
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monstroooo Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulations! This deviation has been featured in our :earth:Weekly Roundup! :clap::boogie:

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sillycanadianwriter Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
WOW, what an honour!!! Thank you soooooo much!!!!
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:iconmonstroooo:
monstroooo Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That's a really poignant piece of poetry. It's beautifully written and goes straight to the gut.
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:iconsillycanadianwriter:
sillycanadianwriter Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!!!! I feel like drawing from real life here really gave it its power and I'll definitely be keeping that in mind as I continue to write.
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monstroooo Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Great :D
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:iconsillycanadianwriter:
sillycanadianwriter Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
:D
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Rieal-Dragonsbane Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I like how you did the passing of time and circumstance in the last two verses. ; ;
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:iconsillycanadianwriter:
sillycanadianwriter Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much! I struggled to say all that I wanted to in a short piece, so that means a lot!
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Imaginarionify Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Really beautiful. ^_^
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:iconsillycanadianwriter:
sillycanadianwriter Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :/
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Femme-Fatale333 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Oh...that is so perfect...I almost want you to expand, but then I don't, but then...ooooh, this is a good poem. Like dude. Really, really good poem
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